There is nothing quite as disappointing as an unsatisfactory end to a great story. This can be seen in pop culture, such as Star Wars and Game of Thrones, but it is also relevant biblically. Of the many verses and stories within the The Holy Bible, there are a few that have endings that, given the opportunity, people would change. One of these stories is Revelation 21: 5.
The story has a strong and engaging beginning, but it falters near the end. The second verse in this story even says, “ I saw the Holy City, the new Jerusalem, coming down out of heaven from God, prepared as a bride beautifully dressed for her husband.” It is expected that this story would have more anticipation; there should have been more exploration and excitement in the Holy City. The story essentially says that those who are corrupt, make mortal sins, or don’t believe in God will not be accepted into heaven. The important verses in this story, however, are “He who was seated on the throne said, ‘I am making everything new!’ Then he said, “Write this down, for these words are trustworthy and true.” These help verses help progress God’s purpose and his creation of Earth, but it is irrelevant to the story of heaven. These verses also leave the idea of what God was creating unresolved. What exactly is ‘everything’ the man on the throne was referring to? And was that same man God? It can be presumed that he is, yet there is no solid proof.
This story could be improved by discussing what all it takes to enter heaven. It could also be improved by providing more details. Those with no background information on God’s creations will be confused by this story. How many of each animal does he create? On which day does he create them? There should be more detail, and also more enthusiasm. The creation of the world is no small feat. It should be treated with exuberance.
This story is captivating, yes, but it lacks a solid, concrete ending. It should be a bit longer. These verses don’t help the audience determine the purpose of the man on the throne, nor why he is ‘making everything new.’ It’s an interesting story, but it just needs more depth. A few added details could make this the most engaging story told in the bible. Less isn’t always more, especially in the case of Revelation 21.
